3 responses to “(Favorite Book) Terry Tutu: A Dance At Coney Island”
Ariana Loyfman
Hello! I like how you did not rush through the story and you made sure to annunciate each word. I also enjoyed how you would bring the images close to the camera. As well, I like that you chose a book that can benefit children and teach them a valuable lesson. My only suggestion is to read just a bit louder. Overall, great job!
Sofia Buttaro
Hi Victoria,
I like that as you were flipping to the next pages, you stopped to show the animations for the audience to see. I also liked that you had emphasis in your tone of voice when reading positive affirmations. (bright, joyous, etc). I agree with Ariana, I think it would be beneficial if you projected your voice a little bit more.
Kateryna Senkovych
Hello, Victoria. I like how you were showing us the images in the book to show what was going on. I also like how you kept looking back at the camera to keep us engaged. I do agree with others that maybe it would be more entertaining for children if your voice were a bit louder. Other than that, you did a good job!
Need help with the Commons?
Email us at [email protected] so we can respond to your questions and requests. Please email from your CUNY email address if possible. Or visit our help site for more information:
Comments
3 responses to “(Favorite Book) Terry Tutu: A Dance At Coney Island”
Hello! I like how you did not rush through the story and you made sure to annunciate each word. I also enjoyed how you would bring the images close to the camera. As well, I like that you chose a book that can benefit children and teach them a valuable lesson. My only suggestion is to read just a bit louder. Overall, great job!
Hi Victoria,
I like that as you were flipping to the next pages, you stopped to show the animations for the audience to see. I also liked that you had emphasis in your tone of voice when reading positive affirmations. (bright, joyous, etc). I agree with Ariana, I think it would be beneficial if you projected your voice a little bit more.
Hello, Victoria. I like how you were showing us the images in the book to show what was going on. I also like how you kept looking back at the camera to keep us engaged. I do agree with others that maybe it would be more entertaining for children if your voice were a bit louder. Other than that, you did a good job!