Hey, Ariana! I liked how you kept looking back at the camera, to show you’re engaged and want to maintain eye contact as much as you can. As you read, maybe take a little more pauses sometimes so the kids can take it in, and you can explain things in the middle. Great job!
Kateryna Senkovych
Hello, Ariana. I like the book that you chose to read; it seems interesting. I like how you were showing the images so we can understand more what is going on. One thing I would suggest is maybe try to put in more emotions to show the kids what the characters feel during certain moments in the book. But overall, you did a great job!
Victoria Lucenti
Hi Ariana! I enjoyed reading along the book with you, and I really liked that you kept making eye contact with your audience. I also really liked how you held the book to show the images within the video, it was perfect for your audience to really see the images. The only thing I would suggest is to take more pauses while reading, I of course noticed that you were doing so in some parts, but I did recognize in the beginning that other parts were read a bit more faster. Overall, I think you did a really great job reading this story to us, truly!
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3 responses to “Ariana Loyfman – Enemy Pie”
Hey, Ariana! I liked how you kept looking back at the camera, to show you’re engaged and want to maintain eye contact as much as you can. As you read, maybe take a little more pauses sometimes so the kids can take it in, and you can explain things in the middle. Great job!
Hello, Ariana. I like the book that you chose to read; it seems interesting. I like how you were showing the images so we can understand more what is going on. One thing I would suggest is maybe try to put in more emotions to show the kids what the characters feel during certain moments in the book. But overall, you did a great job!
Hi Ariana! I enjoyed reading along the book with you, and I really liked that you kept making eye contact with your audience. I also really liked how you held the book to show the images within the video, it was perfect for your audience to really see the images. The only thing I would suggest is to take more pauses while reading, I of course noticed that you were doing so in some parts, but I did recognize in the beginning that other parts were read a bit more faster. Overall, I think you did a really great job reading this story to us, truly!