Beautiful story but I think that a little more enthusiasm and looking up from reading would have been great
Amy Khait
The way you told the story was very nice and engaging, but more looking up and expression would be awesome !
Nitzan Naim
Hi Anifat! Thank you for reading this beautiful story to us. I love that you have an Ariel doll and the print on the wall behind you—it really shows your enthusiasm for the story, just like your daughters! One thing I noticed, and that I also struggle with, is the varying tones throughout the reading. Adding some hand gestures and body language could also help engage the audience even more (I struggle with that as well).
Anifat Abumislimova
Oh, I did not expect to see myself here at all. Thank you, girls, for your comments. Now I will know what I need to work on.
Sofia Buttaro
Hi, Anifat! I love the story of the Little Mermaid. I can tell you love the story from your voice, but I think for next time, maybe make a little more eye contact, and use more facial expressions and body language.
Selina Chen
Hello Anifat! I really like how you added a toy that related to the book that you were reading. I think showing the audience the pictures that was on the book can give help the audience see and visualized what you’re reading too! ( I really like your background picture!)
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6 responses to “The Little Mermaid”
Beautiful story but I think that a little more enthusiasm and looking up from reading would have been great
The way you told the story was very nice and engaging, but more looking up and expression would be awesome !
Hi Anifat! Thank you for reading this beautiful story to us. I love that you have an Ariel doll and the print on the wall behind you—it really shows your enthusiasm for the story, just like your daughters! One thing I noticed, and that I also struggle with, is the varying tones throughout the reading. Adding some hand gestures and body language could also help engage the audience even more (I struggle with that as well).
Oh, I did not expect to see myself here at all. Thank you, girls, for your comments. Now I will know what I need to work on.
Hi, Anifat! I love the story of the Little Mermaid. I can tell you love the story from your voice, but I think for next time, maybe make a little more eye contact, and use more facial expressions and body language.
Hello Anifat! I really like how you added a toy that related to the book that you were reading. I think showing the audience the pictures that was on the book can give help the audience see and visualized what you’re reading too! ( I really like your background picture!)