I loved your use of images while you told the story. It was easy to follow along with and made it easy to engage. Great presentation!
Shiraz Biggie
You have really wonderful clear diction and your tone is great for the story. You do a good job with subtle changes to help bring out key moments. Keep going with that. Don’t be afraid to go bigger. When we think we are exaggerating it can often actually be more engaging for our listeners. I would have liked to be able to see a bit more of you telling us the story. While the images are fun, I didn’t find that they added as much, particularly those that are from Tangled which bring up in the watcher that version of the story rather than the one that you are reading. Well done with time on this story as sometimes this is one that can go long.
Selina Chen
Hello Ariana! I really liked your presentation and how you included images to your story. Your tone is really nice and the images were also really easy for me to follow along the story.
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3 responses to “Ariana Loyfman – Rapunzel”
I loved your use of images while you told the story. It was easy to follow along with and made it easy to engage. Great presentation!
You have really wonderful clear diction and your tone is great for the story. You do a good job with subtle changes to help bring out key moments. Keep going with that. Don’t be afraid to go bigger. When we think we are exaggerating it can often actually be more engaging for our listeners. I would have liked to be able to see a bit more of you telling us the story. While the images are fun, I didn’t find that they added as much, particularly those that are from Tangled which bring up in the watcher that version of the story rather than the one that you are reading. Well done with time on this story as sometimes this is one that can go long.
Hello Ariana! I really liked your presentation and how you included images to your story. Your tone is really nice and the images were also really easy for me to follow along the story.