4 responses to “The Three Little Pigs (Read Aloud by Victoria Lucenti)”
Anifat Abumislimova
Great presentation! I liked how you changed your voice when you said the wolf’s words.
Amy Khait
I liked your tone of voice and expression while telling the story!
Shiraz Biggie
Very engaging overall. You did a nice job of telling us this story more than it feeling like you were just reading it. I wish we could have seen more of you and your facial expressions! The images are cute, but its your work that actually makes the story come alive. Well done with the huffing and puffing and repeated phrases. One thing I want you to experiment with is bringing out the emotions. If you show us more of the emotion, like the wolf’s anger or the pig’s fear, we will connect even more to the story.
Selina Chen
Hi Victoria! Amazing presentation! I really liked how you included the pictures when you told the story I felt like I was really engaged into your story telling.
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4 responses to “The Three Little Pigs (Read Aloud by Victoria Lucenti)”
Great presentation! I liked how you changed your voice when you said the wolf’s words.
I liked your tone of voice and expression while telling the story!
Very engaging overall. You did a nice job of telling us this story more than it feeling like you were just reading it. I wish we could have seen more of you and your facial expressions! The images are cute, but its your work that actually makes the story come alive. Well done with the huffing and puffing and repeated phrases. One thing I want you to experiment with is bringing out the emotions. If you show us more of the emotion, like the wolf’s anger or the pig’s fear, we will connect even more to the story.
Hi Victoria! Amazing presentation! I really liked how you included the pictures when you told the story I felt like I was really engaged into your story telling.