Rumplestiltskin – Nitzan Naim


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5 responses to “Rumplestiltskin – Nitzan Naim”

  1. Mahnoor Avatar
    Mahnoor

    Hello Nitzan! I loved how you explained the story, giving the audience a clear understanding of the entire story and keeping us engaged. I think your story telling is perfect for an older audience; maybe if it is targeted towards younger kids, having pictures and slowing it down can make it easier to follow. 

  2. Anthea longville Avatar
    Anthea longville

    Hi Nitzan, wonderful storytelling as Mahnoor stated for an older audience. I liked how you used facial expressions and your tone was expressive and well understood. Overall well done .

  3. Victoria Lucenti Avatar
    Victoria Lucenti

    Hi Nitzan, I absolutely enjoyed watching your video! I loved the fact that you generalized each page and provided us with visuals to better understand the concept of each page and what was going on. Your voice was loud and clear, and it was truly a nice touch to the video. I also do agree with my peers, this would be a perfect storytelling towards an older audience, and for a younger audience, the only thing that I would suggest would be storytell/read at a slower pace, just so our young audience can pick up on the concept as well. Overall, you did such an amazing job!

  4. Michelle Cortes Rodriguez Avatar
    Michelle Cortes Rodriguez

    Hi Nitzan , I enjoyed watching your video. You had a good tone of voice.

  5. Selina Chen Avatar
    Selina Chen

    Hello Nitzan, I really enjoyed watching your video because of your tone and the way you read the story. I also really liked the way you kept eye contact and it made it seem like you were really reading to the audience and not just for yourself.