Summary
I hope you like this video, though you might not. English is my second language, so my pronunciation might not be perfect—that’s why the subtitles might appear differently.
CASD 1717 – Fall 2024
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I hope you like this video, though you might not. English is my second language, so my pronunciation might not be perfect—that’s why the subtitles might appear differently.
Comments
6 responses to “The Three Little Pigs—Tory Sen”
Thank you for sharing your video! I really liked the story you chose, and I liked how you stayed focused on the story throughout. You also covered all the main points of the story. One thing I would consider is working on the flow of your speech to make the story feel more natural and engaging for your audience.
Hi Tory! I really liked how you showed the images to keep the audience engaged, and you also read the story clearly, getting it across easily. I think for next time, adding some emotion to your voice and facial expressions could make it more engaging.
Hello Tory this is one of my favorite fairytale stories. The visual pictures was a good touch for your audience because it helped to enhance the storytelling. The use of different voices could have add more fun to the story and a bit more joy to the end of the story would bring more of a sense of happiness. Overall is was great listening to your story.
Hi Tory, I really liked each section of you showing us the photos to the story, it was a very nice addition to your storytelling to provide us as the audience a more visual understanding. The only thing I would suggest is to add more facial expressions while reading, it may help towards the mood/emotions part of the storytelling 🙂
Hey Tory , I enjoyed watching your video. I also liked how you showed us the pictures and you stayed focus on reading.
Hello Tory, I noticed that after you read each section/page, you showed us the image of the story and I think that is a very nice addition for the way you can tell a story. Thanks for sharing your story!