I hope you enjoy this section of the book. It is worth mentioning that the book has beautiful illustrations that I was not able to show in the video, but you can find them on YouTube.
A Flat for Rent by Leah Goldberg – Presentation #1
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CASD 1717 – Fall 2024
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I hope you enjoy this section of the book. It is worth mentioning that the book has beautiful illustrations that I was not able to show in the video, but you can find them on YouTube.
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2 responses to “A Flat for Rent by Leah Goldberg – Presentation #1”
It is really cool that you chose a book from your culture. I enjoyed listening to you.
I didn’t know that it had been translated into English! Very nice job with this. I like what you are doing with the rhythm of the verse text and you’ve made nice character choices in the dialogue. One thing to work on a bit is taking a bit more time, particularly when you transition between narration and characters. Think about how you can use pauses to your benefit.