The story of Cinderella is timeless and captivating and it was a delight listening to it. You might want to emphasize the joy of the ending a bit more. Overall great job.
Ariana Loyfman
I like that you included images as well as the text to help the audience keep up with what is going on in the story. I agree with Anthea about emphasizing the joy at the end.
Victoria Lucenti
Hi Mahnoor, I really enjoyed the use of your images and text throughout the storytelling! It provided a clear visual for your audience. The only thing I would suggest is to add in more pauses throughout your read, when thinking of a younger audience, some may use the pauses as a moment to capture and fully understand what they have just heard. Overall, you did an amazing job with your storytelling!
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3 responses to “Cinderella – Mahnoor”
The story of Cinderella is timeless and captivating and it was a delight listening to it. You might want to emphasize the joy of the ending a bit more. Overall great job.
I like that you included images as well as the text to help the audience keep up with what is going on in the story. I agree with Anthea about emphasizing the joy at the end.
Hi Mahnoor, I really enjoyed the use of your images and text throughout the storytelling! It provided a clear visual for your audience. The only thing I would suggest is to add in more pauses throughout your read, when thinking of a younger audience, some may use the pauses as a moment to capture and fully understand what they have just heard. Overall, you did an amazing job with your storytelling!