Hey! I liked the way you told the story and your description of the story. I would suggest that you use a more expressive tone when reading and speak a bit faster when reading at times. However, the story telling kept me engaged and interested.
Nitzan Naim
Hi Selina! I really liked that you explained that you are reading from a screen, and that is why you keep looking up. I also liked that you had your hands free so you could add some body language into the reading. The parts I found myself most engaged in were when you changed your tone and added those gestures. I think it’s something we can all work on and take even further. The ending was great as well – I liked that you took the time to sum up the story. Thank you for reading to us!
Anifat Abumislimova
Hi Selina! You read really well and did a great job summarizing the story! I also really liked your hand gestures as they added an expression to the story.
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3 responses to “Goldilocks And The Three Bears”
Hey! I liked the way you told the story and your description of the story. I would suggest that you use a more expressive tone when reading and speak a bit faster when reading at times. However, the story telling kept me engaged and interested.
Hi Selina! I really liked that you explained that you are reading from a screen, and that is why you keep looking up. I also liked that you had your hands free so you could add some body language into the reading. The parts I found myself most engaged in were when you changed your tone and added those gestures. I think it’s something we can all work on and take even further. The ending was great as well – I liked that you took the time to sum up the story. Thank you for reading to us!
Hi Selina! You read really well and did a great job summarizing the story! I also really liked your hand gestures as they added an expression to the story.