Hi Anifat! I love that you also gave this presentation about the little mermaid. It was a great presentation, and I enjoyed listening to it. The little mermaid in the background is great as it helps get into the world of the tale. One thing I would consider is maybe playing with your tone a bit more to add some variation, which could highlight key moments in the story.
Anthea longville
Hi Anifat, I love the story of the Little Mermaid and there is a clear moral and lesson that children could relate to. Also love the picture of the Little Mermaid in the background. You may want to change your tone a bit to convey emotions, excitement or suspense in the story but job well done.
Michelle Cortes Rodriguez
Hi Anifat, I enjoyed watching your video. You had a good tone and it was easy to follow along .
Selina Chen
Hi Anifat, The little mermaid is one of my favorite stories growing up reading and I love how you presented this story. I also really like your background picture of the mermaid since it’s related to the story you’re telling. I enjoyed your presentation!
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4 responses to “The Little Mermaid”
Hi Anifat! I love that you also gave this presentation about the little mermaid. It was a great presentation, and I enjoyed listening to it. The little mermaid in the background is great as it helps get into the world of the tale. One thing I would consider is maybe playing with your tone a bit more to add some variation, which could highlight key moments in the story.
Hi Anifat, I love the story of the Little Mermaid and there is a clear moral and lesson that children could relate to. Also love the picture of the Little Mermaid in the background. You may want to change your tone a bit to convey emotions, excitement or suspense in the story but job well done.
Hi Anifat, I enjoyed watching your video. You had a good tone and it was easy to follow along .
Hi Anifat, The little mermaid is one of my favorite stories growing up reading and I love how you presented this story. I also really like your background picture of the mermaid since it’s related to the story you’re telling. I enjoyed your presentation!